Be careful with dabbling in old time sake.

I know you mentioned it in the story, that you limit seeing him because of Meth. But that scene was the most vivid for me as a reader.

As concerned as I am for Keith and love that you're there for him. By saying no to meth, you're honoring us as readers and you avoid the risk of him getting stinking thinking, "Oh he only comes for the drugs."

Your writing is honest. I would not want you to lie to us or omit those sorts of facts. Appreciate that you told that truth. Many writers wouldn't.

But also as a reader, I don't want to read more stories about you doing drugs. Not because you hide it, but because it isn't in your life.

With respect. That's my take, not trying to make a huge deal about it. Just 1 data point to consider.

Thank you for this story and the discussions it's started. You've got people thinking deeply about the world. It's a gift.