"Be different and follow Hemingway’s lead."

This is the 2nd article where you espoused this advice.

Yet, this piece is littered with clutter. If you admire simplicity, cut.

But personally, I think you should embrace your style. Write an article about why you write the way you do and what you like about it. Tell us about making it as a writer who loves run on sentences, parentheses and parentheticals! 💙