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Because this is a pinned article, cut therefore in the first sentence. It makes it seem like the opening line was meant to be in the middle of the article.

Also,

"Therefore, a woman with high standards will not accept certain things in the course of a relationship, including cheating, emotional detachment, and inactivity, as well as disrespect."

Is stronger if you shorten it to,

Therefore, a woman with high standards will not accept, cheating, emotional detachment, and inactivity, or disrespect."

Great listicle.

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