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First, thanks so much for the follow. Means a lot.

2nd this was an awesome read.

3rd quick notes.

I think you should use Subheaders. And take into account the visual nature of online writing. It helps pull the reader down the page. "Oh, I only need a little further to get to the next big idea."

Varying paragraph sized will help make it feel like an easier read.

Back to just how the story made me feel. 100% related. I feel like post pandemic people don't know how to drive in Chicago. It's wild. Cars going 100+ weaving through traffic giving each other inches of pumber space for no reason.

The world isn't on fire! Chill out.

Thanks for sharing this.

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Daniel Andrew Boyd
Daniel Andrew Boyd

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