Thanks for the follow.

This is jam packed with info, but you have to break up these paragraphs it's hard to read on mobile.

Put in some subheaders to help make it visually interesting and also it's good for SEO.

You're getting claps but I think it'll really pop if you format the next one a little slicker.

I liked the images. Make sure to keep saying where you got them. That's good for accessibility and seo too.