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This is a little inside baseball but... I think you should test out moving your about me up. So the story is the end of the story.

I also think you should stick to 1 call to action and focus on the benefits to the reader. Even if it's buying you a coffee, focus on buy me a coffee and you'll get... What? Regularly updated articles, what's the irresistible offer?

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Daniel Andrew Boyd
Daniel Andrew Boyd

Written by Daniel Andrew Boyd

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